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Oh…
There you are.
I didn't see you through all this smoke at first
Is it smoke or just dust?
I can't really tell.
It's so dry here.
And loud
I didn't notice that until now
There's shouting
And sharp, piercing cracks
Your back's pressed against a wall
The building it belongs to is gutted and empty
There are pockmarks in that wall
They spiral crazily just above your head
Is that a rifle?
You check the magazine,
Ram it home again
Guess it must be
I never really thought those hands would ever hold a gun
It's kind of jarring to see.
Look around the wall at the same time
There are more people with guns
They want to hurt you
Don't know how I know that
Don't really care
You always tried to protect me
You just went too far this time
Now how do I save you?
This can't be real
I can't be here with you
But I have to protect you
Stop them
Stop the bullets
Stop
Don't hurt her
Don't hurt her
Don't hurt her
I have to save you
Need to
Need you
There's somebody screaming
Wish they'd stop—makes it hard to concentrate
No, wait.
That person screaming—
That's me, I think.
What is it I'm saying?
Screaming.
Begging.
For you to please,
Please,
Run
There you are.
I didn't see you through all this smoke at first
Is it smoke or just dust?
I can't really tell.
It's so dry here.
And loud
I didn't notice that until now
There's shouting
And sharp, piercing cracks
Your back's pressed against a wall
The building it belongs to is gutted and empty
There are pockmarks in that wall
They spiral crazily just above your head
Is that a rifle?
You check the magazine,
Ram it home again
Guess it must be
I never really thought those hands would ever hold a gun
It's kind of jarring to see.
Look around the wall at the same time
There are more people with guns
They want to hurt you
Don't know how I know that
Don't really care
You always tried to protect me
You just went too far this time
Now how do I save you?
This can't be real
I can't be here with you
But I have to protect you
Stop them
Stop the bullets
Stop
Don't hurt her
Don't hurt her
Don't hurt her
I have to save you
Need to
Need you
There's somebody screaming
Wish they'd stop—makes it hard to concentrate
No, wait.
That person screaming—
That's me, I think.
What is it I'm saying?
Screaming.
Begging.
For you to please,
Please,
Run
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reality?
You want me to save
The person you all see;
I'm dying to save
The girl I'll never be.
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we're never what we think.
at least twice a day, i find myself wishing i was less.
less of a worrier.
less of a lover.
less of a mess.
all of this would be so much better, if the disconnect between
what i want and what i have would close because then things
would be simple for the first time in years. and i could inhale
without wondering what kind of consequences it will have five
minutes from now. you can only imagine what really goes
through my mind in the time it'll take you to breathe in and
out. now hold it. like i've been holding this thought for months
the girl i was is quickly vanishing.
i've been holding it like a secret on the tip of
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Sepulchral
There is a realm
that I cannot reach,
and it dwells within
the darkest corners
of your stoic heart.
Barricaded by grief,
these walls have yet
to reveal an emotion
that has been sought
by my very own soul.
-Brian Shuffett
July 28th, 2010
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Not all my dreams about her are good ones.
Yes, this is a dream I've had. Less clear, of course, because when are dreams ever this perfect? I embellished it for structure, not for content.
I tried to capture the feeling of a dream. Everything odd but also not. Sometimes you look at things from the vantage point of a child and you don't understand everything right away.
But I also chose this style because it's disjointed. It feels frightening to me because it's not controlled or smooth. It's just my thoughts all at once falling all over each other.
I should also give credit to *Birds-with-Teeth for the Don't hurt her stanza since I got the idea of changing emphasis from one of her works.
I feel like I'm going a little crazy ><'
Yes, this is a dream I've had. Less clear, of course, because when are dreams ever this perfect? I embellished it for structure, not for content.
I tried to capture the feeling of a dream. Everything odd but also not. Sometimes you look at things from the vantage point of a child and you don't understand everything right away.
But I also chose this style because it's disjointed. It feels frightening to me because it's not controlled or smooth. It's just my thoughts all at once falling all over each other.
I should also give credit to *Birds-with-Teeth for the Don't hurt her stanza since I got the idea of changing emphasis from one of her works.
I feel like I'm going a little crazy ><'
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i really like, by the way who is she