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Nightmares

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Oh…
There you are.

I didn't see you through all this smoke at first
Is it smoke or just dust?
I can't really tell.

It's so dry here.

And loud

I didn't notice that until now
There's shouting
And sharp, piercing cracks

Your back's pressed against a wall
The building it belongs to is gutted and empty
There are pockmarks in that wall
They spiral crazily just above your head

Is that a rifle?
You check the magazine,
Ram it home again
Guess it must be

I never really thought those hands would ever hold a gun
It's kind of jarring to see.

Look around the wall at the same time
There are more people with guns
They want to hurt you

Don't know how I know that
Don't really care

You always tried to protect me
You just went too far this time

Now how do I save you?

This can't be real
I can't be here with you
But I have to protect you

Stop them
Stop the bullets

Stop

Don't hurt her
Don't hurt her
Don't hurt her

I have to save you
Need to

Need you

There's somebody screaming
Wish they'd stop—makes it hard to concentrate

No, wait.

That person screaming—
That's me, I think.

What is it I'm saying?

Screaming.

Begging.

For you to please,

Please,

Run
Not all my dreams about her are good ones.

Yes, this is a dream I've had. Less clear, of course, because when are dreams ever this perfect? I embellished it for structure, not for content.

I tried to capture the feeling of a dream. Everything odd but also not. Sometimes you look at things from the vantage point of a child and you don't understand everything right away.

But I also chose this style because it's disjointed. It feels frightening to me because it's not controlled or smooth. It's just my thoughts all at once falling all over each other.

I should also give credit to *Birds-with-Teeth for the Don't hurt her stanza since I got the idea of changing emphasis from one of her works.

I feel like I'm going a little crazy ><'
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average-wierdo's avatar
i really like, by the way who is she