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Today

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Today, I packed away your pictures.
And the way I folded away your smile
Felt like I was losing you for good

I took a walk to clear my head
And found something unexpected

I stepped out into the street
And the way the sun touched my shoulders
Seemed like your arms around me

I passed a candy shop
And the way the sugar scorched and browned
Became the precise shade of your hair

I lay down in the park
And the way the grass tickled me
Felt a little like your fingertips on my skin

I stayed and watched the setting sun
And the way it colored the sky a warm pink
Became the same soft color of your lips

You used to blush when I kissed you.
I saw that in the sunset, too.

Then I waited until the stars came out
And the way the they lit the night
Looked like your eyes when lit with a smile

I saw you in the world around me
And I even though your pictures were gone

I knew I'd lost nothing at all.
I'm afraid of forgetting her, but maybe my fears are groundless. She is everything I see.

The only thing I can't seem to find is the exact quirk of her smile. That was always my favorite part, as I'm sure many of you are tired of hearing.

Story poems aren't really my forte, to be honest. This is the most narrative I've ever been, I think, but trying something new is cool, too. Please do tell me if I got it right or if I missed the mark ^^;

Anyway.

Loves.
© 2010 - 2024 o-ohhai
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never3's avatar
yep u got it right - this is about your comentary...