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It seems no matter how many girls I kiss
The only lips I can taste are yours
Only your hands touch my skin

Only your scent lingers

So I hope you don't mind
If I keep you with me
Just a little while longer

At least until that scent fades.
As if.

:shrug:
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:iconminnemanne:
MinnemannE Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011
Yeah, alcohol only numbs pain (I know it) This piece is so close to my heart. :aww:
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o-ohhai Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011
:huggle:
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missyemily94 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
I love how simple this piece is; I love your long pieces as well but your short are really growing on me! This piece is lovely, the emotions behind it as well. I'm sorry you're still hurting :heart:
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o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010
Aw, thank you :heart:
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ChocolateQuill Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
AGREE!
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
:tighthug:
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:iconchocolatequill:
ChocolateQuill Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
yay!. and thanks for faving "i'm alone". that meant a lot
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
My pleasure ^^
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:icontravellingsoldier:
TravellingSoldier Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Nicely done...

Yes - bad; extra bad; tasty ^^

College is designed for experimentation -nod- And kissing girls is fun!
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010
Thank you :huggle:

And true on all counts ;)
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:icontravellingsoldier:
TravellingSoldier Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
=^^= tee hee hee
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:iconlittle-black-alpakah:
little-black-alpakah Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010
Simple but sad *in a good way* :P
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010
Thank you :huggle:
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:iconlittle-black-alpakah:
little-black-alpakah Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010
no problemo :D
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:iconsaskia-mu:
Saskia-Mu Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010
thats so sad!!!!!!!!
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010
Heh... Yeah ^^;

Thanks :huggle:
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:iconsaskia-mu:
Saskia-Mu Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
:) i hope you feel sort of happy soon... as happy as possible anyway :3
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
:tighthug:
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:iconsaskia-mu:
Saskia-Mu Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010
^_^
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:iconpsychoss:
PsychoSs Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
love it!
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Thanks :huggle:
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:iconpsychoss:
PsychoSs Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
thats a nice work
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:iconroseantique:
RoseAntique Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
<3
It's a week night.
I'm drunk.
And I know what is good or bad.
But if you'll believe it was just the alcohol... I'll go ahead and destroy everything for the night.
I never met anyone who did know how to cope; why should I?

Btw, I've stumbled across your poems while /not/ drunk. Or tipsy. Or whatsoever inebriated. And, how I always feel; War breaks hearts. It breaks people. It doesn't matter if you're under that hot sun or back in air conditioned America.
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o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Yeah... Maybe I just want to believe that it was the alcohol. I know how to handle myself tipsy. I just wasn't handling myself this time. Maybe 'cause I didn't want to. To see if it helped at all, you know?

Anyway, thanks for telling me off a bit. I'm sure I needed it ^^;

And you're right. About war, I mean :shrug:
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37Buttons Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
woahwoahwoah. reminds me of my ex who was obsessed with the way I smell. <3
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o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Heh... ^^;

I hope that's a good thing XD
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:icon37buttons:
37Buttons Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
hahaha its not necessarily a bad thing. he was just a strange character.
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dragonflymystic Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
very nice... im new.. also a poet ... so i will keep an eye on ur work :)
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Also-- good luck with your own work =D
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
:huggle: Thank you very much ^^
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ak21626 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely words. And Jagermeister has a lot to answer for:)
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o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Oh, it does. It makes me do... Stupid things :shrug:

Then again, I should exercise proper judgment ><'
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StormTheParade Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
This is great! :aww: the shortest poems that speak the least honestly speak the most if the right emotion is put into it. :heart:
:huggle: You're such an amazing poet
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o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
:blushes:

Geez... Makin' me blush here. Thank you very much :huggle:
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:iconstormtheparade:
StormTheParade Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Hehe :huggle: you're very welcome :)
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:iconbcbase:
bcbase Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
i like your works :) i can relate to them even if the pronoun is different for me
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
I'm glad you can still relate ^^
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:iconbcbase:
bcbase Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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:iconauron-tribal:
Auron-Tribal Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Student General Artist
alcohol makes the clouds go away, but the sun never comes back.
great poem though
<3
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zemyxlover69 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010   Writer
*I like the way you said alcohol solves nothing*
:/
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o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Touche. I don't make this sort of thing a habit. Call it an experiment, if you will, facilitated by the fact that I'm in college and such options as these are available. Still, it's an experiment I don't plan to repeat any time soon ><

Anyway, thank you :iconnewglomp:
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:iconauron-tribal:
Auron-Tribal Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Student General Artist
aww! I know the feeling, though this is my fist year of university

you're welcome!! :D
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:icondbardot:
DBardot Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Student Digital Artist
yay, fem experimentation!
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Haha! You know it ;)

Bisexuality win =D
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:icondbardot:
DBardot Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Student Digital Artist
only on one side of the spectrum, tho:D
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
I like to keep all options open :aww:
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:icondbardot:
DBardot Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Student Digital Artist
i dont mind u doin so:D
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
:iconcocoglompplz:
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:icondbardot:
DBardot Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Student Digital Artist
if u wanna contest me, i swear i could :glomp: u all days!
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:icono-ohhai:
o-ohhai Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
Haha! Bring it XD
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